Tuesday, June 30, 2009
The Red Belly
The red belly is so bright. It looks like a good cherry. It is as bright as Rudolf's nose. The red belly's jelly bean. Jelly beans are so good. Or it could be a jelly belly, maybe the cinnamon flavored one. The red belly's huge heart, beating gallons of bright red blood. The red belly of a pig. In Hawaii, I want to go to a luau and see the red belly of the pig. Actually, that might be gross, but I would love to watch the hula dancers. I tried hula dancing once, not in a studio and without instruction. I just tried it on my own in my house. My family laughed at me. I'm sure it was quite a spectacle considering I had no idea what I was doing. The red belly's laughter. It makes me think of a jolly old Santa Claus in his big red suit chuckling.
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Hi Brittany,
ReplyDeleteI might make these small grammer changes to your fun and entertaining writing:
"The red belly is so bright. It looks like a good cherry. It is as bright as Rudolf's nose--the red belly's jelly bean (jelly beans are so good.). Or it could be a jelly belly--maybe the cinnamon-flavored one. ... the red belly's huge heart, beating gallons of bright red blood... the red belly of a pig. In Hawaii, I want to go to a luau and see the red belly of the pig. Actually, that might be gross, but I would love to watch the hula dancers. I tried hula dancing once, not in a studio, and without instruction. I just tried it on my own, in my house. My family laughed at me. I'm sure it was quite a spectacle considering I had no idea what I was doing. The red belly's laughter, it makes me think of a jolly old Santa Claus in his big red suit chuckling.
We are doing an in-class assignment on July 9th, where I am assigning everyone an artist. Could you please go to the UCI Langson Library and take out a book on John Baldessari. Bring that book to class on July 9th.