2) The first thing I said to him is "crap, I'm late."
3) I checked my alarm and realized that it was set to 9p.m.
4) I rushed to the bathroom and got ready.
5) Then, I bit my donut that cost 99 cents for a dozen from Alberson's.
6) It tasted like frozen dried bread except that it wasn't cold.
7) I threw it away after a bite.
8) I power walked towards the Arts department under the sun and thought it would be a good idea to wear a pair of sunglasses.
9) I walked into he class while everyone was looking at a piece of art work.
10) Marcus asked if I over slept. I smiled.
Funny! You do a good job communicating a sense of urgency. I get the rushing, the panic. I know the feeling. I like "tasted like frozen dried bread". I like the cost detail: 99 cents for a dozen. Maybe, if you want to work on it further, you could add some strange, surreal things to list of events.
ReplyDeleteAngel, could you go to the UCI library and look up Andy Warhol. Bring in a book that you like from the ones about him. We will be using library books for an in-class assignment July 9th.